a bud of mine is a street poet..give a listen and Ill pass along your critiques

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    be honest..but be constructive with the criticism..

    he is for real fucked up dude..bout 22...lives mostly in the streets and going from one friends couch to another...I worry for him.

    but his words are not fake..its from the heart...some dark shit..always got anew girl then she breaks his heart..he got to be a hard to guy to be with...he tests even my friendship...

    he toys with rap..but he is mostly a poet and part time rocker..when he is not living in an ally.




     
    doctorie, Dec 10, 2010
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